Add Vice
Just beyond the chandelier of the sun
a hallowed hall is filled with mourners
perfecting the soliloquy of tears
to mark the true final death
of want
take it however you like
see it with both eyes open
though they be glazed and hollow
like the empty place inside your chest
that used to house your marching heartbeat
the cavity filled with bent feelings
crooked matters best left undefined
the correct bearing and temperament is always an ally
one should never fuck off
even though it burdens you with rebuffing
the very flattering attentions from your own ego
flirt with dust if you must
but leave the self alone
because vanity is a hungry fire
with teeth that chew and gnaw the bones
the very nature of a jackal can’t compete
with the vicious lusting after something
you can never own
but play with like a toy
only to be cast aside to rust
along the restless road of age
Fantastic – I don’t know how I missed this one (may wordpress is deteriorating). That Borland dude did a fabulous rendition as well!
Thank you Gabrielle
I agree, Bryan read it better than I could. That Borland man has a flair for this I think!
You are a tremendous friend and peer Mr. Borland, consider yourself hugged a bunch of times.
Inthis case the guilt is a good thing for making a poem emote
I think your mom and my paternal grandma might be sharing some cigs !
Phew! That’s a relief Jessie, because if I were channelling Ma, I’d be mortified. lol Your grandma sounds like a character too.
Bryan, if you want to read it, vlog it, or just beat it to a pulp, go to it honey bee. I’m pleased to bits that you like it. It’s a bit terse and it nearly crosses the preachy line a twice, but it makes it to the end intact. After I read this comment I read it in my mind with your voice and accent and your voice would add gravity to the words. I’m flattered. Now, I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE YOUR VLOG FOR MS. JESSIE’S BOOK! Pray tell, what day are we to expect it up? Oops.. under pressure…hugs
I wasn’t sure of the title, but one does what the muse tells one.
I’m happy you liked it Bryan dahling.
this makes me want to say I’m sorry!
Oh my gawd Jessie, I’ve turned into ma and written a guilt poem! LOLOLOL I’m horrified and she is laughing on the other side…probably with a ciggie dangling from her hand. HUGS So, does your urge to say you’re sorry mean this is a good poem or a bad poem?
Mmmm…”chandelier of the sun.” I love that imagery.
Thank you Tel. Isn’t it like seeing the dancing lights of a chandelier when it shines on water?
you’ve done it again.
nice work
Thank you kseverny! By the way, your new webarts idea is pure genius!